I were a witch I would change many things. First of all I would make school year shorter. I would become a milionaire. When I would finish 18 years I would leave to USA and I would live in the New York City. I would create a beautiful house with a big swimming-pool over the ocean. In front of the house there would be a court to basket and tennis. I would buy the fastest and the safest car. I would play in New York Knicks and I would be it owner, too. I would be the best player the largest and the most famous NBA team. I would have two kids and a beautiful wife, then I would become the happiest person all over the world. I would create fundation, which would aid poor and sick people.

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If I were a wizard I would change many things. First of all I would make school year shorter. I would become a milionaire. After finishing 18 years I would leave to USA and I would live in the New York City. I would create a beautiful house with a big swimming pool over the ocean. In front of the house there would be basketball and tennis playing fields. I would buy the fastest and the safest car (in the world). I would play in New York Knicks and I would be its owner as well. I would be the best player in the largest and the most famous NBA team. Having two kids and a beautiful wife, I would become the happiest person all over the world. I would create fundation, which would aid poor and sick people.

wizard - witch (czarownica)/wizard (czarodziej)

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